[STORY TIME?]

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Submitted by Wizzandy on April 9, 2026

Ok so if you are chronically online like me, you will realise that there hasn't been a message board post in 2 days. Soooooo, I will break this unusual silence with something fun, something that used to be popular in JetPunk. Let's do the game where somebody starts a story, and the users can reply with one sentence that can change the story in any way they like. For example:

I start - Once upon a time, a handsome prince travelled across lands, searching for true love.

Another user replies: But one day, he stumbled upon the kingdom of Gavalon.

Another user replies: He came across a priest, who told him that the kingdom was in great famine after a rival kingdom attacked and destroyed their crops.

An also here are a couple of rules:

1. You cant reply to your own comment, but you can still contribute to the story more than once

2. No irreversible death of the protagonist.

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Apr 9, 2026

Ill start: One day, a cosmic meteorite landed somewhere on earth.

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Out appears something, something glowing, something mysterious...

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Something.. too strange and Bartholomew goes to inspect..

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But before bartholomew could, he tripped over a branch and broke his legs.

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As he howled in pain, there came a baker.

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That baker was none other than the famed Muffin Man who lives in Drury Lane.

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Bartholomew looked up at the Muffin Man and said, “Don’t I know you?”

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And the baker in reply says nothing. Instead he gives a stern look at Bartholomew and signals him to follow.

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Bartholomew, confused, asks "Tell me who are you?", refusing to follow him

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The baker says "eat my shorts", which annoys Bartholomew, because that's his line.

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Horrifyingly, Bartholomew watches on as the baker proceeds to actually consume his shorts.

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"Get away from me!" Bartholomew shouts. But it's too late.

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But Muffin Man forgot that he left a tube of super glue in pocket of his shorts.

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Then the weird substance from the asteroid earlier rapidly expands and consumes the baker

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Bartholomew quickly runs to grab the super glue that had fallen out of the muffin man’s pocket

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(Didn't he break his legs?)

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The weird substance from the asteroid starts consuming other people albeit very specific, ranging from a celebrity in town to a school teacher.

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The weird substance glances at Bartholomew, and forms into a Tiger, Elephant and a vague figure which looked like a human zombie, and POOF! it disappears.

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Leaving behind an angry koala bear..

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The angry koala bear runs towards Bartholomew,

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Bartholomew gets rabies from the koala bear but fortunately goes to the hospital and is cured

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Bartholomew walks around the oddly empty hospital, and then he finds...

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A hospital mask which makes every word you say sound wise.. once it’s worn. And as he picked it up and put it on…

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His eyes filled with confusion and dread, as the only words he could muster up were “chungus amongus”

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His tongue flew out of his body and into the air as his lack of work made his tongue rebel from his body causing a huge civil war to occur in his mouth with the teeth and bacteria allying with the tongue against the jaw bone.

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(what)

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The tongue which was still airbourne hit at ruck driver which made him crash into a rock which uprooted a tree that pushed a rock into a pingo which destroyed it and made a lot of falling rocks that orbited the earth at high speeds and eventually came back crashing down and destroying all the pingos in the world

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The Jawmancipation Proclamation occurs which brings peace to Bartholomews Mouth. Until....

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The esophagus hated the treaty so it declared independence.

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I guess this pingo survived!

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Then Bart ran into the ocean for some reason.

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He swam deeper and deeper, his lungs his two most loyal allies, and found peace in the ocean’s depths, a peace which was shortly and cruelly disrupted by the sound of a friendly crab getting sucked into a small crack in a maintenance pipe and suffering the gruesome effects of a little thing called differential pressures.

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He tried to save the crab, but ended up getting sucked in

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The pipe turned out to be in fact a one way wormhole; the other side of the wormhole is the planet Kepler-186f where the plants are red.

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He ate a mysterious fruit from a tree which cured his colorblindness, and to his surprise, it turns out the plants here were actually more of a maroon all along!

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Then in the distance he heard explosions!

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It turned out that he had suddenly appeared in the Invincible universe, and he heard those explosions because rex sploded.

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After 'sploding', Rex proceeded to go out of his mansion to greet Bartholomew

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Rex and Bartholomew meet each other, and greet one another, right next to the BIG STRONG TREE.

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And the BIG STRONG TREE told them: "I bear a quest upon you. Go forth and rescue the princess from her castle tower. But beware; a dragon guardeth the gates!" And so they went.

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Unfortunately, the dragon made Rex fly all the way to Mauritania, so Bartholomew continued the rescue alone.

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There in Mauritania, Rex had an equally important side quest

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His side quest was to sit under an apple tree for a really long time so he would achieve enlightenment and derive Newton's laws at the same time.

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In the heat of the Mauritanian oasis, stood a man- no, a mirage, of none other than Newton himself, who guided Bartholomew and Rex Splode on the path to enlightenment and taught them Newton’s Eighth Law of Motion- “If either of you has a piece of gum on you right now, you should definitely, like, give it to that Isaac Newton guy, or the planet will implode on itself or something… yeah trust me dude, I didn’t write the rules of the universe.”

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Rex and our ol' pal Bart started panicking, desperately checking the 100 pockets they both had for gum, but their search was in vain...

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Bart and Rexes lungs declared independence as the stress from the panicking was too much.

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Bartholomew’s lungs formed an alliance with his esophagus from earlier and began to wage war on his body, his tongue flew away again, Rex Splode exploded his skeleton to stop an evil alternate universe Bartholomew or something, and as if all that wasn’t bad enough, Bartholomew received a phone call informing him that his tonsils were hit and killed by a drunk driver.

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Bartholomew suddenly wakes up. He suddenly finds himself under the big strong tree, and he understands that he was dreaming. He also finds out that Rex is in danger. He knew that he had to save him. But now he has 2 choices - Go for the Princess or for Rex.

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(That's more than one sentence😭)

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rex is dead, rex sploded

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Due to his enlightenment and guidance from Sir Isaac Newton from under the Big Strong Tree, Bart had a plan on what to do.

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As he executed his plan, his thoughts leaped out of his head and he forgot everything, including his own name.

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He thought his name was "Quintimingus", and he tried to continue the quest, but had a Cheshire cat by his side.

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And the Cheshire Cat was none other than the one found in Alice in Wonderland

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The cat attacked him and he fell to the ground, blood seeping out of his head though miraculously he did not feel any pain and ended up in Monowi Nebraska

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Then Monowi's population increased to 2, and Nebraska freaked out, and Quin/Bart was scared and fled to Missouri

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He was shocked when the Show Me state showed him nothing but grass.

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However when Bartholomew observed closely, he found a manor in the distance.

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As soon as he stepped inside, the Manor collapsed

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But the hero never dies, he “miraculously” survives.

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He works hard, rebuilding the manor piece by piece only for it to collapse again,

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The rubble slipped through his fingers and the thick dust wore down his lungs, as he stared out at his empire of nothingness.

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He finds it worthless, and remembers the trapped princess

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He travels to the princess's location, but Toad shows up, telling him that the princess is in another castle. Bartolomew gives up, using the same trick Jeremy2011 used to break the rules. He wanders into an empty Belgium shaped area in Europe and is erased from existence, and then our story ends.

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But what is unknown to them is that it is only the end of one beginning.

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