Firstly, a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes (I don’t mind thaaat much, just letting you know), secondly Dark River isn’t the last book of The Prophecies begin—that’s The Darkest Hour—it’s the second book of Power of Three. Cloudtail is Firestar’s nephew, not cousin, ‘best medicine cat’ is debatable (I personally think Jayfeather is a great medicine cat), there’s a typo in Squirrelflight, you added and extra ‘i’—Squirr-i-elflight. Firestar has 3 grandsons, Alderneart, Lionblaze and Jayfeather so please accept at least ‘Lionblaze’ not just ‘Lionpaw’ and please accept ‘Skystar’ for first leader of SkyClan too! Thx